11 responses to “POEM|If Only She Knew”

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   Amelia in Hull

   June 29, 2018 at 4:31 pm

   Amazing writing xx

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      Mariam Shittu

      June 29, 2018 at 5:13 pm

      Thank you ☺️

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         Amelia in Hull

         July 1, 2018 at 9:56 am

         It’s okay xx

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   Just_Me :)

   June 28, 2018 at 10:23 pm

   Hi, Mariam! I nominated you for the Three-Day Lyrical Challenge. Check it out here:

   Three-Day Lyrical Challenge – Day 2

   Have a wonderful weekend! 😊

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      Mariam Shittu

      June 29, 2018 at 10:45 pm

      Hello, thanks for the nomination. I’ll check it out now. Have a great weekend too.

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         Just_Me :)

         June 29, 2018 at 10:58 pm

         It’s my pleasure! 😊

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   eddaz

   June 28, 2018 at 6:52 pm

   Beautiful words. I love the poem 😊

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      Mariam Shittu

      June 28, 2018 at 7:06 pm

      Thank you ☺️

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         eddaz

         June 28, 2018 at 7:08 pm

         You are welcome 😊

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   Understand546

   June 28, 2018 at 5:22 pm

   Nice poem and clever title.
   I felt like this poem is about hiding and afraid to tell your true emotions to a girl that you like so you keep them to yourself

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      Mariam Shittu

      June 28, 2018 at 7:08 pm

      Thank you 😊, you’re right. He’s afraid to tell the truth because he doesn’t want to lose her if she doesn’t feel the same way.
      What a sad way to live☹️

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